What I would have wanted to improve was the relationships between Feste and the other characters, especially with Malvolio. I was so focused on getting the character of Sir Topas in the scene 4.2., that me and Michael didn't really have a play around what our characters could have done to interact with each other physically, perhaps creating a more comedic atmosphere and show Feste's resentment towards him. I would have also wanted to show the relationship with between Viola and Feste during the last scene, since they have had some banter earlier in the play, but I found it hard to do that with Sophia, since she wasn't really giving me anything back during the scene, so I gave up on this quite early on in the development.
I think something to work on for me would have also been diction, clarity and fluency of my lines. I can remember messing up on some of my lines, nothing major, but it could have affected the way the audience understood it.
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